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The article ‘An asylum seeker’s story: journey to Australia’ makes use of various persuasive techniques, both visual and text–based techniques to attempt to convince the reader of its legitimacy and to arouse sympathy in the reader towards asylum seekers. It is an autobiographical extract from the Australia and New Zealand College of Anaesthetists Bulletin. The main contention in the article is that the decision asylum seekers make to flee their country from persecution and fear is not one that is made lightly. Key visual techniques used in the article are headline, image and caption and the key language techniques that are used consist of emotive language, imagery and repetition.
The visual techniques used in this article have a very significant contribution to the article’s meaning. Their main purpose is to refute the image the majority of the population holds of a stereotypical asylum seeker which in turn helps to convince and persuade the reader. This contradiction is achieved by heading the article with a picture of a professional looking anaesthetist, dressed in theatre scrubs and surrounded by complex and theatre related machines. The combination of headline, image and caption are typical of an article that would be found in a newspaper or bulletin, as it gives the audience more information on what to expect. However, the information to follow is different from the normal information expected. This is because at first, the reader would not relate the picture of Dr Alkhazrajy with being an asylum seeker. Yet the information describes how this asylum seeker got into his profession. Alone, the image of Dr Waleed Alkhazrajy, in a professional surrounding, is meaningless. Yet when we read the caption it gives us deeper understanding into the background information supporting the image. These techniques are effective as the image draws the reader’s attention to the article and the caption and headline work together to captivate the reader and lure them further into reading the rest of the article.
The language techniques used in the article are equally as important as the visual techniques. The combination of emotive language, anecdote, repetition and imagery that are used has a heavy impact on persuading the reader. The article uses emotive words like ‘die’, ‘fear’, ‘sentence you to death’ and ‘torture’ to arouse deep affections and sympathy within the reader. Using such strong language causes an emotive response in the reader which in turns softens their hearts and transfigures their views whilst they continue to read the article.
The audience this article is aimed at is the general public of Australia. It is appealing to the reader to have sympathy and feeling towards asylum seekers. He uses short, easy to understand sentences containing simple language which makes it easy for the majority of the Australian population to understand and empathise. The context is defined in using words like ‘asylum seeker’, ‘people smugglers’, ‘flee’ and ‘boat’ and immediately the reader can grasp a hold of what the article is about. The use of more professional language like ‘doctor’ and ‘anaesthetist’ qualifies the text and causes the reader to respect and accept the context of the article. Alkhazrajy makes an overt appeal to the Australian population in begging them to give the asylum seekers a fair go. He succeeds this by saying, ‘I just want the Australian population to understand the amount of pressure and desperation for these people to make this journey.’ This article is appealing to a general audience which is the overall population of Australia. It is not narrowed to a specific audience as there are no jargons or elements of technical and hard to understand language, preventing the average person from understanding the article. Therefore it easily creates a feeling of compassion and empathy in the reader bringing about a dramatic change to their view on asylum seekers.
In conclusion, the article uses language techniques well to make the reader sympathise with asylum seekers. In using strong emotive language like ‘die’ and ‘fear’, the reader has no other option but to put themselves in the life of an asylum seeker and understand the difficulty of the decision they are forced to make.