Language Analysis: First Thoughts?

[lexitu]

Okay - so, yes, what?

Quite an atypical piece to give you all. But remember: atypical for everyone.

What were your thoughts?

[kamb0z]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

[Danielhogz]

Hey question. If i didn't use both images and just used the tribal tattoo one. Is that bad?

[waffles19]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

Yeah I just mentioned them at the end.. hope it's enough. I used both images tho

[FatnessFirst]

For some reason I couldn't tell if she was opposed to the idea of having a tattoo or not. -Face palm-

[SDPHD]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

I acknowledged them. I didn't analyse them because they weren't Day's comments. I hope I'm right in thinking that.

[waffles19]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

I acknowledged them. I didn't analyse them because they weren't Day's comments. I hope I'm right in thinking that.

+1

took the words right out of my mouth, buddy.

[STUDENT4]

i thought she was for it, as she was saying it was modern, traditional and what not
then when i asked everyone they were like she was completely against tattoo's saying it was once meaningful and now it has become a superficial with no meaning

if i intepreted wrongly saying how screwed am i?

[bodriagin]

Is it just me or was there not much to write about for the article? :l I wrote about 2 pages which didn't flow in contrast to 5 pages for text response and 4 for context. Expecting a 5 for language analysis.

[jane1234]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

I acknowledged them. I didn't analyse them because they weren't Day's comments. I hope I'm right in thinking that.

+1

took the words right out of my mouth, buddy.

I analysed them because it said how is language & visuals used in the blog, which technically includes the comments. But I'm sure you'll get credit for mentioning them, definitely didn't need to go into detail.

[kamb0z]

Pretty shitty article...
Did anyone else acknowledge the comments?

I acknowledged them. I didn't analyse them because they weren't Day's comments. I hope I'm right in thinking that.

I stated that some of the comments consolidated the effect that her arguments had, as the comments were made by the 'readers'.

[waffles19]

Is it just me or was there not much to write about for the article? :l I wrote about 2 pages which didn't flow in contrast to 5 pages for text response and 4 for context. Expecting a 5 for language analysis.

OMG I have the same feeling that my worst is language analysis. It's usually my best component of the exam as well. I just think the piece really wasn't engaging nor interesting, and it didnt really have much of a voice.. it was boring to analyse and I don't think I put enough techniques in.. im so scared

[chuhi]

I think I'm screwed.. i wrote she was for it..and that tattoo is common nowadays..so ppl should go for it .. ;(

[Danielhogz]

Hey question. If i didn't use both images and just used the tribal tattoo one. Is that bad?

[cltf]

I suddenly feel the urgent to get a tattoo...that's how unconvincing she was.